| Candidate Number- 7227 | Main Task - Short Film | Ancillary Task - Film Poster & Film Review |
Friday, 17 February 2017
Page Two Underway! Draft Two
Now that my review page is half finished I can focus all of my attention onto the second page of this ancillary task. On my second page I did add more scratched onto as there was a slight random black section that seemed out of place, this was just to help with the consistency and theme of the background as having a random plain section could actually draw the readers attention to it when it's not needed.
I also played around with the positioning of the verdict section as I felt like it didn't fit in well and was almost like an eye sore so, through looking at other EMPIRE review pages through Google Images and actual magazines I saw that some copy the style that was used for the summary section and when trying that I saw that it looks great. I feel like the rectangle to the side almost indicates the beginning and the end of the review, beginning with the summary and ending with the verdict. However, this has actually resulted in leaving a rather large gap in the second page with I have attempted to fill with more text but then it feels to text heavy which I know and personally find as something not appealing, I've also tried to fill it with another image but then the layout of the images doesn't look correct and they look misplaced so that is something I need to figure out and I have some ideas in mind such as, a scare O'meter etc.
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