As I said in my Final Pitch I was struggling in completely finishing the storyline so I have decided that to try and help me do so I will do a form of plot blocking where I can pin point certain aspects I definitely want in the storyline and then development them further.
1- First shot of female lead with blood all over her face.
2- Transitions with a black screen with un-human noises and whispers followed by the female lead startled and waking up from what can be assumed as a nightmare, Friend brings round Ouija board asking female lead to take care of it while she goes to work and after some hesitation and refusal she caves in, this portrays her as timid and weak.
3- After friend leaves, the female lead goes about her daily tasks. After some time she starts to hear strange noises such as shuffling, thuds, rattling etc. She goes to check/investigate to find the Ouija board had fallen from where she left it, maybe spilled out onto the floor. She begins to collect it back up to put it in the box when the planchette begins to move across the board and spells out a message(maybe in a different language that translates to something like 'death', 'revenge' maybe Greek word for death =
Θάνατος etc.) message could first be spelt using English letters, Oavatoc and then when she looks back she can see it has been corrected to Θάνατος .
4- (Later in the same day, evening time) The friend comes back to the female leads house to collect her Ouija board and walks in to find the living room covered in pieces of paper with some satanic and some other dark symbols (inverted torch?) on to them (drawn/painted on in black and red.) The Ouija board is placed in the centre of the living room floor surrounded by all of the symbols, the friend turns to walk out of the living room but it met by the female lead face-to-face who then shouts 'boo' in her face. (perhaps the audience would be able to see her slightly in the shadows before the friend turned to face her.)
5- They talk for a bit and then when the friend goes to ask female lead about the symbols she find that they're gone, the female lead looks confused but then shrugs it off, the same as the friend. They go to the kitchen to have some drink and when the friend goes to drink it she is met with a horrible copper taste and when she looks she sees it is blood, she spits it out only to find that when she looks back at it, it's water. At this point the friend seems nervous and anxious but the female leads seems joyful and calm.
6- The friend goes to the bathroom to splash water on her face and it cuts to a close up on her face fully in the frame and her looking above it and then suddenly a dirty dark hand twists it's fingers into their hair but when the friend turns to see where this motion had come from they find the bathroom empty.
7- The friend asks for her Ouija board so they go into the living room where the friend had left it the first time, as the female lead goes the collect it the lights flicker slightly as she walks past them and when the friends asks about it the female lead replies with "it's just a power surge" she collects it and hands it to the friend and then suddenly the TV turns on making the friend jump. (when the TV turns on it could possibly be a film with some dialogue saying "you're going to die" or "run" etc. foreboding the next event.)
8- The female lead grabs the friends arm and asks if she's ok and the friend begins to reply with yes when she looks at the female leads hand to see that it is soaked in black paint and then when she raises her head she see that the female lead now has large circles under her eyes with black paint also smudge on her face. Then looking at her surroundings she sees that the paper on the floor with symbols have yet again returned.
9- Scared and confused the friend backs away going to leave but as she turns the female is yet again face-to-face with her and she starts to speak but the female lead grabs the friends shoulder and plunges a weapon possibly a knife into the friends stomach stopping them in their tracks. We would see a reaction shot from both characters, the friend in shock and struggling to breath while the female lead seems expressionless. The whole time this is happening the lights could be flickering, TV getting more chaotic.
10- The friend drops to the floor landing on the symbols and the female lead finished her with one last attack, you don't actually see it but you would be able to hear the sound effects and the last breath the friend would draw connoting her death, as the female lead would stand up you'd be able to see part of the lifeless friend.
11- It would end with the same shot it began with, a close up of her bloody face.
Notes:
They could end up back in the living room and the female lead could kill friend and as she does the symbols re-appear and red blood drips onto the white paper of the symbols.
Number 6 slightly inspired by the Smiling Man/ Ouija
As you can see my idea worked and I have managed to complete my storyline and my next step will be to do another more detailed plot blocking where I can also narrow down the most important sections.