After some feedback I made the beginning idents a bright more blood red as some said that it blended into the black background too much. And then after doing this I made some shots longer to help the switch and motions of the characters between the two flow much better and making it less chopping which was due to my rough editing in the beginning.
I also added a section to help with some character development and that was a section where there's a shot of Claire's eye and then a clip of fire over-lays it followed by a sequence of shots that will be seen further on into the short film as if to foreshadow what might happen without giving too much away, this is then repeated at the end to help the audience make the connection between the two.
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